Not a great way to start the week

15 06 2009

Hi All

Unfortunately the professional body that I’ve been studying with have decided to move my professional certification exams forward a month. This means that I’m

A) Panicking quite a lot since I was expecting a whole extra month to study
B) Very annoyed for the same reason as A
C) Studying like a maniac on speed.

This means STW will be on a hiatus until the middle of August. I’m gong to try and resist the mind wandering that usually happens to me at points of stress. However I shall make notes and review any of the stories etc I come up with during my stressed frenzy.

Sorry for anyone who’s been hoping that I would get off my ass and work more on this project but I really *really* have to prioritise.
If I do well on these exams then I may (more than likely) get accepted into my chosen masters programme which will absorb all of my time and potential savings for a mortgage but will in the long run result in a much higher pay cheque and a more comfortable future where I can write all I want and relax with the potential sproglings one day.

Anyway I may update from time to time to simply vent my frustration at the damn wanky businessy subjects I’m studying and maybe not.

Also check out my twitter under Leannemellows for my sporadic day to day updates too.





Radio Silence?

3 06 2009

Well I haven’t updated all week.

The reason, well the weather is just too damned hot to do much. I’m Irish and living in Ireland. We’re usually lucky to get an actually sunny day let alone a week of consistent sunshine. It’s means that I’ve been melting a lot during the week and it does interrupt sleeping patterns and creativity patterns.

 Also work (the thing that pays me so I can pay for electricity and this site) has been quite busy. Its left me completely exhausted (plus the heat in which I can’t sleep) so I can’t really do much other than veg or read a book.

 There are other things too. This chapter 5 is about hopelessness and some soul searching by the main male character. It’s incredibly tough to even begin to frame that in my mind, let along write about it when the sunshine is making me cheerful and happy. In fact it’s very tough to even imagine that when I look outside with the flame orb high in the sky.

 I’m very tempted to begin sketching out some new and different ideas in my head for scenes towards the end of the novel but I doubt the piecemeal approach will work.

 Hopefully it will be overcast and rain in a couple of weeks. That way I can get a lot of my depressing stuff down on a doc file.





Chapter 5 part 3

28 05 2009

He sat there for what seemed an age. His tears soaked through the bandages and stung his wounds. When he had no more energy left he simply sat, head in hands, for what felt like eternity. He heard noised outside his cell. People walking up and down the corridor, the jangling of keys. He heard a loud thunk which made him look up. Through a narrow slit in metal door in front of him he saw a set of eyes regarding him for a moment. Then another thunk as the slot was closed again. The sound of footsteps walking away and muffled voices. The there was nothing but silence. He shifted his position again and looked at the palm of his hands. This was the first time he’d done so properly since he woken up.





The cover

19 05 2009

If  the still unnamed story ever becomes a real book this is the image I’d like to have as the cover.

http://www.trekearth.com/gallery/Europe/Ireland/photo982070.htm

This is the spire (as described in chapter 1) and a very dark forboding atmosphere. It’s perfect to be honest to capture the mood I’d like to capture in the story.





What’s with the short updates?

19 05 2009

Right I haven’t been doing enough regular updates. This is bad because I have the story in my head and a lot of the stuff is here I just need to get it out.

I’m going to be updating paragraph and line by line as I write them because that’s all I can get time to write during the day.

Well ok I seem to get creative ideas when I’m sitting in work at my desktop. The I get home, tired from the day with a laptop and the T.V and nothing seems to get written. This is awful of me. I am investing in a new Desktop specifically fro writing because at this stage it makes sense. Now all I have to do is get one in budget (500 euro) Or even better still get one off a friend who’s getting rid of their older desktops (looks hopefully at friends out on the internets)

 Anyway there will be a lot more short updates and then weekly I’ll be consolidating them in one place and updating the chapter page. I’m hoping that this way will help me be a little bit more productive and help people to critique my work a little bit better.

 I’ve also set a Goal for myself that by December I will have 20 chapters.





Chapter 5 Part 2

19 05 2009

The world swam for a moment as he got his moved and steadied himself in a sitting position. He was in a prison cell. The past few hours appeared in his head like scenes from a bad film. Flashes of the man falling from the window. The scene below, the rain falling in the broken window. He had a memory, vague and fleeting of the ceiling tiles and the noise of the door being thrown open. Several shouts at him but the words hadn’t meant much. He couldn’t move. Then a man in a white jumpsuit helping him out of his suit. He looked at his hands. There were cuts from the glass underneath the dressings. What had happened? Why had he done such a thing? He hadn’t even thought he was capable of such a deed but here he was in a cell someplace in Dublin City knowing that he would probably be spending the rest of his life in a room similar to this one. He began to cry.





Quick post

11 05 2009

Hi all

Seems that I’m getting a steady stream of visitors these days. Thanks everyone for checking in on me on a regular basis. I’ll try to make this worthwhile for everyone.

Since my 1 year anniversary is coming up when I founded this site possibly people can make a suggestion of what I should to celebrate?

Ohh and for those of you who don’t know I’m also on twitter under Leannemellows. Come follow and find out what I do for the rest of the time when not writing.





Chapter 5 pt 1

9 05 2009

He woke up on a hard mattress. The first few moments were a blurry eyed daze before his surroundings came into focus. The light was intense and his room was a cold creamy white. The moment he moved he noticed the pain. His hands and knees sent thousands of sharp stabbing sensations through his body.

He looked and his hands were bandaged. That was when he noticed he wasn’t wearing his suit. He seemed to be shod in a blue papery material. His head hurt as he sat up.





Still Here

23 04 2009

*tap tap* is this thing on?

Ok yes I have been utterly terrible about updating. I apologise to everyone about this. There are a few reasons for the silence.
First off I’ve moved house. This means that I’ve spent a lot of time, energy and money in getting into the new place. The getting settled takes some time which is unfortunate because you need to be settled to be creative.
Second thing and it’s a big one is this damned economy. I’ve become far busier trying to keep down my actual real life job. If I could get paid for writing then this website would be much fuller with shiny things and tonnes more work. So by the time I get home I’m exhausted and just can’t sit down to look at a screen for another few hours.

Now what does all this mean? Am I going away? Am I hell! I’m still here, I’m settling in a bit more. The economy, well worldwide, is beginning to get a little bit better so there’s a smidge less stress.
I’m going to set out a schedule for writing as well so that I should have more regular updates in the future.





I aint dead

13 03 2009

Ok I haven’t updated in a while.

Needless to say I ain’t dead. Nor have I quit the project. I have however been massively busy and side tracked with real life which has taken alot of my creativity and free time.

I’m now back to the grind and all things going well I should have most of chapter 5 done in two weeks. You can even e-mail me to see if I’m still working on this.

Thanks to those who do pop by and are still reading. I hope not to disappoint too much in the future or take such big gaps again.

- Leanne





Some comments and such

28 01 2009

Right well no update in a while which is terrible of me. Apologies to that single person who kept checking in on me. It is appreciated and I hope you keep popping by.

 

So firstly some notes on the last chapter. It’s definitely not sitting well with me to be honest. I really don’t think I’ve captured the fear and the pain well enough. I did want something tragic and shocking to happen to the female lead but I don’t know that entire final scene just felt very flat to me. Serves me right for writing it in an airport. It’s definitely marked for a reworking.

 

Also I’m still not happy with the female lead’s name. Stephanie just doesn’t sit well with her personality. At least I don’t think it does. I’m leaving it for now but I will be thinking of a new name.

 

Talking about names, still no name for this project. The only thing I’ve been able to think of is “Spire and Lightning” but that’s kind of tat and a little bit low budget sci-fis for me.

 

Also in other news, I’ve been quite busy with this real life lark. It’s a bitch but unfortunately it has to be done. Work has become exceptionally stressful and also I’ve been sidetracked with college projects. It means I’ve not really had time to sit, think and write properly. I’m hoping to have at least Chapter 5 started though soon enough and get my grove back.

 

Now I’m off to the park to run about and not have my head explode!





Chapter 4 part 4

16 01 2009

She walked to the train station to catch the DART. All of the faces she passed were wet and miserable. This happened after all. It had now been raining all morning. In the distance she heard thunder but it could have quit easily been a lorry nearby.

Near the train station she began to look for her ticket in her handbag. It wasn’t exactly a flimsy bag but there was a lot of stuff in there. She began to wonder why she couldn’t find her purse when there was sudden violent stop to her movements. A guy, thin, head shaven wearing a tracksuit and very expensive runners, ran passed and grabbed her bag. It was halfway down her arm when she realised what was happening. That momentary shock. She tried to hold onto it but he punched her square in the face.

She was knocked to the ground, her light frame carried by the force of the hit. He face hurt and she realised she was looking up to the sky. She never noticed the birds in the station fly past her sprawled frame. There was some shouting as people around her wanted to be seen to do the descent thing and apprehend the criminal but wanted to avoid a fate similar to hers.
She climbed to her feet. She was trembling now and the tall skinny man was nowhere to be seen. Obviously run off in his expensive shoes.
Once she was on her feet somebody said “you better go to the gardi misses, better to report these things” She wasn’t paying attention but nodded.

Somebody took her by the arm and led her to the police station. She hadn’t really been paying attention because the adrenalin was coursing through her system still. She looked and saw the hand on her arm was attached to a wrist and in turn to a grey suit. There was a man leading her. He looked smart, dashing almost. The suit looked expensive and the man looked Italian with his dark hair and tanned skin. He gave an air of knowingness of authority and of kindness.
They stopped outside a police station. The blue mock gas lantern with Garda Siochana and the well recognisable badge over head. The man smiled and nodded and led her into the building. The entrance was blue with old well used benches along the walls. The floor was covered in blue lino with a stain where obviously somebody had spilled coffee on the floor near the reception desk.
The man led her to a bench and let her sit down for a moment. He then went to the desk and started talking the officer on duty. She didn’t really hear much of the conversation since she was so dazed.
She started replaying over the last half hour in her head. The office, her boss, the mugging.
Tears started to roll down her cheek then and the shaking returned.





Some minor progress

11 01 2009

I’ve been doing more work on the still unnamed novel. I’ve been outlining the main things I want to happen right up until chapter 10. Also I’ve been working on some set scenes of how to introduce some of the main characters to one another.
This notebook is damned handy. Now onto some other things that I must do for the day.

I’m getting tempted to post up all of noted from here on in. If I had a scanner I’d just scan the pages but even I’m having issues reading my handwriting from the bus so probably wouldn’t be much good.





Damit!

6 01 2009

Right I have a minor problem here for the last part of chapter 4. I know what I want to happen but for some reason I simply can’t get the words out. I can’t even work up the strength to write it up. Well ok not that I don’t have the strength I’m just under the weather and can’t seem to focus right now.
I have a feeling a lot of this is to do with work and the drop in temp but it doesn’t help.
Hopefully this weekend I’ll spend the days in a warm room with lots of food and be able to get some work done.





Just a quick one…..

3 01 2009

So Happy New Year to you all. I hope that you all had fun and will continue to have fun this year.
Over the festive period Stephen from TeaandChat gave me the most cruel and appropriate gift. I now have a rather wonderful notebook and pen. Mostly so that even when I’m nowhere near a keyboard I can write. It’s cruel cos it means I now have no excuses to not be writing. Well ok I should be writing more. Thanks to the gift I’ve now gotten the main events for the next few chapters done. Curses no more time off. I should hopefully have chapter 4 finished in the next two weeks. However I have some projects to also get done so I have no idea when I’ll actually get it done.