And the second one is DONE

9 11 2008

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Ok so both the operations are done. This is wonderful because it means that I’m going generally be healthier than I have been in a long long time.

Unfortunately I’m still recovering which is quite irritating. Stitches healing are itchy.

I’m also now thinking of the next few chapters. Ok so I’m not involved in the novel writing November thing. Mostly because I just can’t work to that kind of time constraints.

So yeah, dear reader watch this space because I’ll be doing far more updates over the next few weeks. I’m going to try and get at least one update a week from here on in and hopefully get some more exposure. Ok I’ve no idea how I’m going to go about this but I’m going to try.





FYI

9 10 2008

Well going to be off traveling for the next week then heading into another operation after that.

Means that there’s going to be little in the way of updates for the next two weeks but it might help me get some insipration.





Chapter 3 Part 1

2 10 2008

The morning wore on. The streets crowded with people and traffic.

Rainy days in the city were a grey endless drudgery where people forget to look around them and focus only on the ground beneath their feet. Umbrellas prevented the ability to see the sky, but then who would want to on a day like this? Thunder rolled nearby and lightning added a spark of electricity to the atmosphere.

The city flowed for the morning then began to calm down once the initial rush to the office had finished.

Cieran and Mikey sat in their own little world watching people come and go. They knew the movements of some people more than they let on. The watched the movements of the certain people closely. Mental notes were made and they went about their business of begging and getting their next score.

They huddled in out of the rain on their sodden cardboard. A worn and filthy sleeping bag was keeping Mikeys feet warm while Cieran gazed out on the street. He nodded, back to Mikey.

“Nobody around to pay attention” he said.

“Who would have thought it would happen here eh?” said a voice that did not sound like it should have come out of Mikey’s mouth. It was eloquent, polite and educated.

“I know I can’t believe it’s already started” was a response in a similar tone.

Oddly enough nobody looked at the pair. Usually they avoided them and kept walking, today was especially so. Nobody wanted to deal with two drunks when they were already miserable from being cold and wet.

“Do you think he’s going to show up?” Cieran asked of his partner

Mikey shrugged his answer

“So has the judge been chosen? It shouldn’t be left to just one side to pick.” He asked

“Well the one side have selected their representative so it makes sense that the other should pick the judge.”

A Garda walked passed and the two fell back into their regular routine of general grumbling about the world. The words “feckers” and “shower of wankers” were all that was audible above the grumbling.

The Officer was in no mood to move them along and he was well used to the pair. They were a harmless enough and caused no problems for him so for today he left them be .After all it was a miserable day. A call came across his radio which drew his attention away from the drunken duo.

The man in the white suit had a prime view of the scene. The body cascaded from the window. It had a look of fear on his face and utter surprise. Once it struck the ground it became a bloody wreck.

There was a moment of silence. The world stopped for a moment, long enough for an inward breath. Then the scream. Traffic stopped as people began to rush about and watch the scene as it unfolded. There were several small crashes as cars hit one another. A cyclist was knocked off their bike and sprawled over the bonnet of a car.

The man in the white suit finished his coffee, folded his paper in a single move rose from his chair. By the time he was a foot from the coffee shop door he could hear the sirens converging on this array of people.

He glanced upwards and a person by the broken window. He was looking down with a look of horror on this face, his hands held in front of him covered in blood. The man in the white suit looked at Dermot for a long moment then looked at the pigeon who was perched on a street light nearby he nodded then walked off.





One down one to go

14 09 2008

Ok well I’m done with one of my surgeries.

Funny things that I now remember from the past couple of days. One was that my Aesthegeolist reminded me immensely of John Cleese. Also there was a machine that went “bing”. Oddly enough these were incredibly comforting. Also that the worse part of my entire hospital stay was having the i.v thing put into my arm.

I may or may not be writing soon. I’m still recovering so apologies to anyone who’s keeping track and looking for the next piece.





Chapter 2 pt 2

6 09 2008

The man walked along the street. The rain seemed to move away from him as he passed under buildings. His suit was an impeccable cut, the type that is seen only on not the wealthy but those who have taste and style. It was made of the kind of material which could meld into the background but still point him out as a distinguished member of society.

He stopped at and bought a paper for the day. He had the exact change in his pocket. No matter what he always had the exact correct amount?

The fates for some reason drew him to this place. He checked his watch then went into the small coffee shop he was suddenly outside. Coffee ordered, he sat facing the building opposite. He checked his watch.

Things were running to schedule so far.

People passed in and out of the coffee shop, which, they could have sworn, was actually on the other side of the street yesterday. Nobody noticed the gentleman in his well cut white suit. His hair was brown eyes blue and in all ways average. There was nothing distinguishing about him that people would commit to memory.

The man, he sat and he waited.

Across the road Dermot was entering the building. He’d been feeling slightly disheartened from his experience while stuck in the doorway. He made a mental note to make a donation to one of the many groups who specialised in that kind of thing. The next chugger he came across would have a good day.

His suit was ruined and now he stood in the reception dripping wet, smiling at the receptionist as she drank her coffee and was studiously trying to ignore him.

This he resolved, was not going to be a good day really.





Chapter 2, part 1 of until I’m happy

30 08 2008

The dream was the same dream she’d had for months. It used to frighten her but now it didn’t. She’s adjusted, become accustomed.

The room was bare. The paint was flaking off the walls to reveal the grey plaster underneath. It was a horrible place. It felt like it should smell of damp but it didn’t. It smelled like cigarette smoke and sweat.

The creature was there too. It was writhing around on the floor, a tangle of flesh and bone, intestines dragging on the floor between its wretched stunted legs. Its blood was oozing and brown, at least she thought it was blood.

When the dreams came first she was scared at what they meant but now it was different. She was used to them and could even manipulate them slightly. It wasn’t much use, the same thing always happened. The creature shuffled across the dusty floor. Each step caused it pain, that was obvious from the way it moved, yet it still approached her. Slowly ever so slowly.

She went for the door. Locked, locked again. There was a sound of people outside, she screamed but they didn’t stop the people never stopped. Now she was scratching at the door, the figure moving closer ever closer. What appeared to be hands moved closer to her? The last thing she saw was the grain in the wood of the door before waking.

Now she was awake, her heart was beating the way it did when she had the dream. Sweat trickled down her back and the sheets stuck to her thighs. Her head throbbed as the hangover came to roost.

The clock read twenty minute to go before she was due in work. The rain poured outside and already she was beginning to regret the night before. She worked as an administrative assistant for one of the Professors in the main universities of the City. It was mostly making sure that he made it to classes on time but afforded her the opportunity to brush up on her skills and get extra classes at night. This was always really meant to be a temp job but after two years it hadn’t really changed.

She picked up her phone and dialled the office. She left a voice mail explaining that she would be late and reminded her boss of his meeting and where to find the files he’d need. Not a good day to pull a sickie so no matter what she had to go in really. “Damn weather” she thought as she went for her second shower of the day. A flash of lightning filled the sky.

By the time she had arrived in the office her feet were soaked, her umbrella was inside out and she was soaked through to the skin. Third shower of the day she thought. She rooted around her desk for a moment and pulled out some painkillers, the type that most women have hidden some place in their desks. Her computer was not co operating either. She sighed; it was going to be one of those days.





So the reason for my absence……

28 08 2008

Hi All, (ok the one person who actually reads this)

Ok so as you may have noticed I’ve had no output for a while now.

No it’s not a case of I’ve given up already. I do genuinely have plans for the next chapter. However I’m still trying to think of names for the main characters and that can be a hard thing. (Suggestions on a post card……not joking either it’s the reason I post the stuff after all)

I’ve promised one friend that I’ll name a character after them but I don’t think it suits either of the main characters at all.

What’s been happening is that I’ve gone through massive amounts of stress lately. Stuff to do with my personal finances falling through, my relationship coming to an end and a lot of other things has lead to me not really being in a creative fame of mind.

I’m lucky in that my former partner and I are still quite close and will always be friends (yep it’s cliché).

I’ve also got my finances back on track after a long talk the bank. This means I can pay off my medical bills and all that jazz. I’m going to be going for minor surgery soon, even with health insurance it all adds up. On the plus side I should be off work for a week and drugged up so I’ll have lots of time to write.

I’m glad that a lot of the big stressors have calmed down. It means that I can actually start to get the creative buzz again. Once my health is back on track I’m hoping that I’ll have more energy as well. For now though I hope that you can be patient while I sort out some of my private life.

I suppose these are the challenges one faces when you try to get yourself started really. It’s a case of balance that’s been completely thrown off kilter. I like the fact that I only have a vague notion of how things are going to go with the characters as well.

Also going to get a friend of mine to help me reorganise the site a little bit so that I can get all of the “proper” writing in one place. It will be helpful, I think for anyone who’s coming along and saves them trawling through the blog type updates instead.

So hopefully over the next week I’ll have most of chapter 2 done and updated. If I’m lucky I can keep on going on to chapter 3.

Ohh an e-mails and comments are much appreciated too so please keep them coming.





Bah

8 08 2008

The second part of chapter one I really don’t like. I think I focused too more on the duo than the other character. Hmm

I’m going to continue with the story but I think that it could so with a rewrite.





Ch1 pt 2

7 08 2008

He was on the bus when the rain had started. “Damnit” he thought. He’d come into the city early because he had an interview that morning. It was ample time to get something to eat then wander around get his bearings on where he needed to go and of course be on time. Now, now he was standing in a doorway praying for the current downpour to end. This wouldn’t be too bad except that he’d not noticed the two drunks continuing on from last night. He was hoping upon hope that they wouldn’t stab him or pester him for money. In face he wished for no contact at all with these people. He couldn’t leave without ruining his suit and then looking like a drowned rat going into the meeting.

The drunks hadn’t really taken much notice of the newcomer. They were more engrossed in their own trials and tribulations of how the world should work. Cieran and Mikey had been sitting in the same doorway, or so it seemed, for years.

Cieran had lost his family in an accident. He’d had the support of his nearest and dearest at first. Over time they began to go about their own lives and forget a little bit about him. He never got the support he needed and found sympathy at the bottom of a bottle. Time turned inside out for Cieran and he ended up in a doorway with a bottle as his only comfort. It didn’t really help but it made him numb which was all that could be expected of him really.

Mikey, well Mikey had been born into a rough home. He’d stolen his first car at fourteen and taken heroin for the first time at sixteen. He couldn’t really afford it much and ended up sitting down beside Cieran one day. For some reason he stayed there and never really went away.

Now the duo were arguing about something. It was getting heated and loud. Something to do with the weather. How it was unnatural kind of downpour.

All he knew was that he was in a bad mood and it was getting worse. He left the doorway. Earlier he had been optimistic and full of life. Now he felt like a husk of a man, heading towards the end of his day.

The two continued to argue and complain long after their unnoticed visitor had left.





So

29 07 2008

Ok I’m currently working on chapter 1 pt 2.

Mostly I’m trying to balance the introductions of the characters and such.

Also I’m trying to set the mood.

For those who are curious about the parts of the city that I mentioned you can go to http://www.dublin.ie/ it has alot of information about the city itself.

Right now I don’t have much time to myself but I’m hoping to get some more done soon. It’s a case of this part of the chapter is forming in my head but getting time to put it on paper is far harder.





Chapter 1 Part 1

20 07 2008

This is the first part of chapter 1. At the moment the project remians untitled.

Awake.

Her skull pounded with that most unmistakeable feeling of a good previous night. Her head ached and she knew it was going to be an unpleasant reminder for the rest of the day.

The room was silent and grey. Then she realised it wasn’t her room. After a moment or two of internal debate she decided it was best to roll onto her back and get her bearings in this new environment. She rolled; the world swam and then reconnected back into place. There was a body lying beside her. It was Jason, the damned student from the u.s.

He was this perfect mixture of arrogance and idiocy that she hated but for some reason she was massively attracted to at the same time. She’d been able to put up a mental distance for so long. He was heading back soon, so why oh why did she end up here?

This was a question that would have to wait until later. Her head swam again. She needed water but knowing most students she decided it would be best to just get a bottle in the nearest early morning shop.

After some strategic moves involving stealth and sheer luck she managed to get out of Jason’s dingy room with all of her clothes from the previous night and without Jason waking up. Once in the hallway the sheer neatness of his flat struck her as odd. Unlike most students of his age Jason had his own flat. His father had bought or rented it for him, she wasn’t too sure. Now that she looked around she noticed the floors were clean and free of dust. The shelved were covered in books, not just text books but Tolstoy, Plato, Nitche and Machiavelli. “A philosopher” she thought only to immediately have this thought replaced by the phrase “damn art’s student”, this being her immediate reaction to anyone studying the arts. It wasn’t out of malice just she could never fathom the point of doing these subjects without getting a job at the end of it.

The rest of the apartment was neat and clean. It seemed that they had both gone straight to bed the previous night. She smiled in spite of herself. She couldn’t remember what had happened but small snatches were coming back to her.

After a quick trip to the bathroom she left the splendid apartment. Although she had work to go to that day it would certainly be a bad idea arriving in her going out clothes. She also desperately needed a shower. Luckily it was still very early, unfortunately it was raining.

Dublin city in the morning is a very odd experience. It takes on a quality of unreality. It is a grey city most of the time with grey buildings and grey streets. Even the spire taking a central focus on the city’s north side is a monument to its greyness. Yet for some reason when the dawn breaks and the light of the sun grants it’s first gentle kisses to the world it feels happy, colourful and serene.

This is a time before the people flood the streets from commuter towns so it has a sense of quiet.

She stepped out onto the street to find herself by the docklands looking across the river. The sky was heavy and laden with rain that hadn’t yet fallen but then again it was November. The rain began to patter down as she walked towards the O’Connell Street on her way home. A street cleaner gave her that knowing look. That look which tried to judge and bore shame into one’s very being. “Damn” she thought, “I must look really bad”.

She eventually got home to realise it was six in the morning. After peeling off her uncomfortable worn clothes she went to the bathroom. A quick look out the window showed that it was still raining. “Well that will be down for the day” she mumbled before getting into the hot refreshing water.

It was too early to go to work so after cleaning off the smell and feel of Jason and a heavy night, she decided to try and sleep off some more of her hangover. It was going to be one those day’s alight.

A man stood with his palms against the spire. Mumbling something in an arcane tongue the spire itself vibrated with a motion useable to the human eye. He was dressed all in white who was unusual for a city where the general clothing was black and denim with small splashes of colour. His dark hair was braided down his back and he mumbled. Once the first spatter of rain had hit his face he smiled. A moment later he finished whatever he had been doing and walked off.

From their perch two ugly birds watched as all this happened. One flew down to the street to peck around for scraps to eat. Debris of the night before, the other sat and watched the man with a cold eye.

The rain began to get heavier. There was a feeling of something in the air something imperceptible like electricity.

The pigeon and the man knew there would be lightning before the rain had stopped.





Juices are flowing again

15 07 2008

I’ve been writing again. I am a happy bunny!

No really I’ve been taking five or ten minutes every day to add a little more to the story and it seems to be coming along. I’m hoping to have the first chapter or at least the first draft of the chapter done by the weekend.

I’m pretty darned delighted that the juices are flowing again.





Suffering for ones Art?

5 07 2008

Ok so this isn’t a post about mucht except to explain why there’s been no posts lately.

Unfortunatley I was in a car crash a couple of weeks ago and ended up injured. Add that ontop of somepersistant ilnesses and things and well I’ve either been too sore or too tired to write. It’s very irritating because I do want to write but all of my energies have been focusses on getting better instead.

Honestly I don’t know how some writed became well known for being off their heads and how they were so inspired. Mostly I’m falling alseep a lot of the time and can’t focus beyond my own nose.

Anyway I’ll be back to writing proerly soon eneough.





Beginning

10 06 2008

Things could start in the traditional manner. Maybe this is a traditional beginning. All I know is what happened was not normal or what one would consider traditional. It began, as most things do with something small. It began in a way that was imperceptible to the rest of the world bar some of the more sensitive. It stated with the rain.
Some say rain washes away sins. It brings life from the sky. Who knows but here the story begins with the rain.





Conmel, Making good on a Drunken Boast

6 06 2008

Ok and now for something compleatly differnt

Ok at Galecon last year something quite special went up for auction. It was a pillow which was part of the Connonball Run . It effectively meant that if you had this pillow then you could get into every convention in Ireland, a lot of the U.K ones, some in the U.S, one in Spain and I think one in Israel.
(Oh my that’s a lot of Con)

Anyway one brave soulsaid “if that pillow goes for over 2 grand then I’ll run a convention in Clonmel”. The Pillow went for over two grand, I think about two five but I was drunk so can’t remember.

And lo Conmel was born.
Conmel is a convention in Clonmel County Tipperary and is at its core “making good on a drunken boast”
Also it really should be fun. So if you are in well anywhere in the world, want to go to an Irish Con and do want to see some of the country then come along. It should be fun and I’m looking forward to it.

Come on you know you want to…….